Portfolio Project: Final news broadcast outline

FINAL NEWS BROADCASTING SCRIPT (outline)

Here is the edited version of the first script outline I posted. After my mom did a few more takes we edited some things out and changed the wording of some sentences just to make everything flow better. I wrote the rough draft at 2 in the morning because I wanted to get my ideas down but I'm actually happy with this final edit. I'm going to use Celtx to construct a proper final script and then I will post the final script in another blog posting.

I wanted to save you the time of going back and trying to find the edits so I thought I might as well just highlight the edits I made from the original outline to the final!

FIRST ROUGH DRAFT

Good morning this is Ava Dior from the WFX news station in Miami here to give you an update on the vigilante group referred to by many as the Daughters of vengeance. These anonymous heroes have been able to save lives and keep the streets of South Florida safe while somehow managing to keep their identities a secret. They live in plain sight and are said to live normal lives during the day, but at night, they become fierce justice seekers. Even though the identities of this crime-fighting group are unknown, it is believed that there are 4 of them and they are all female. When law enforcement was first made aware of the group's existence they believed that the group was an extreme feminist group with malicious intentions but they soon realized that that was not the case. They seem to be targeting those that have broken the law or hurt innocent people. They've taken the law into their own hands but the local police department assures the citizens of South Florida that this group is non-threatening to the innocent but not so forgiving of criminals. There was a similar group like this in the late 70s and early 80s so some speculate that this group is a new generation of a feminist vigilante group continuing that legacy. Law enforcement has confirmed that they are working on discovering the identities of the group members so if you have any information on this group and who they are please contact the local police department at 754- (audio cuts off)

FINAL DRAFT OUTLINE 

Good morning this is Ava Dior from the WFX news station in Miami here to give you an update on the vigilante group referred to by many as the Daughters of vengeance. These anonymous heroes have been able to save lives and keep the streets of South Florida safe while somehow managing to keep their identities a secret. They live in plain sight and are said to live normal lives during the day, but at night, they become fierce justice seekers. Even though the identities of this crime-fighting group are unknown, it is believed that there are 4 of them and they are all female. When law enforcement was first made aware of the group's existence they believed that it was an extreme feminist organization with malicious intent but they soon realized that was not the case. They seem to be targeting those that have broken the law or hurt innocent people. They've taken the law into their own hands but the local police department assures the citizens of South Florida that this group is non-threatening to the innocent but ruthless against the criminal element. There was a similar group like this in the late 70s and early 80s so some speculate that this group is a new generation of a feminist vigilante group continuing that legacy. Law enforcement has confirmed that they are working on discovering the identities of the group members so if you have any information on this group and who they are please contact the local police department at 754- (audio cuts off)